1. From your 7 subjects assigned on Friday, you will need to revise and clean up your BEST descriptive sentence from ONE of the subjects. This is the one representative sentence, which will be for an ASSESSMENT grade! Yep, this ONE sentence. It must demonstrate your proficiency in handling the skills you have been learning the last week. SHOW DON'T TELL!
You will need to sign in to eblogger... Use your gmail address from the school. Then hit REPLY to this post.You will then write your name and class period.
Then write your sentence. Do NOT label what you are describing.
This will look like:
Lara Schulenberg Cole- 1st Hour Honors Teacher
Her voice, deep, wise, and involved infuses a compassionate controlled comfort and security into a complex existence.
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ReplyDeleteWith violence comes blood spill, feuds raging like the sun, and hearts fill with evil as black as night.
DeleteLoving, assiduous, full of integrity and benevolence; he is my security and protector. I wish this ordinary society was capable of recognizing the potential, integrity, wisdom, and keenness he humbly radiates.
ReplyDeleteA diverse pathway complete with people, experiences and lessons to guide a student from Lee's Summit to where ever they choose.
ReplyDeleteHis accusations fuel my anger, and I can feel the heat rush to my face as my blood begins to boil. I try to bite my tongue, but he continues to taunt me with accusations. My tolerance begins to fade, and I finally snap back in an acrimonious tone.
ReplyDeleteHair frayed and thrown back by a headband, stressed out from the lack of sleep, but still finds time to do the petty tasks I ask, her job is full time, and she's always on call waiting for the slightest whimper of discomfort from those too young to care for themselves during unreasonable hours.
ReplyDeleteMy mother is average height with dirty blonde hair and bright blue eyes that shine like swimming pools on a hot summer day. She is a nose to the grindstone type of worker who lives a chaotic life that would not be the choice of most, yet still has time to care for her family.
ReplyDeleteThe most basic building block for all life. It is with us every second of our life, in us, or around us. It has no true taste, but its value is inmeasureable.
ReplyDeleteA deep, dangerous and painful feeling that consumes peoples souls.
ReplyDeleteAn all encompassing, indescribable feeling of happiness that consumes you; to where home no longer becomes a place, but a person.
ReplyDeleteSydney Mathis - Hour 3
ReplyDeleteI clench my fists while fingernails carve into the palms of my hands, fiery tears sting my eyes, and a deep wrath seethes within my soul, but I must sit in debilitating silence, as there is nothing I can do.
Gabe Baughn- Hour 2
ReplyDeleteFour brick walls, a locked door, bright man made light. An authoritarian figure stands at the front of the room barking out commands that we follow with perfection and precision. Does this sound more like a high school or a jail cell?
Bailey Bales- Hour 3
ReplyDeleteDrama,stress,and talent all tightly bundled up between four brick walls.
When something so soft and gentle, so un-noticeable enters your life at will and embraces your comfort zone without you realizing it, is the reaction of one thing.
ReplyDeleteLindsey Moore - Hour 2
ReplyDeleteThe rich color of blue is an ice cold sense of enchantment that sparkles in the bright sunlight of day and dawn.
Violence
ReplyDeleteViolence personifies the ultimate problem of the earth through its sheer ignorance. It stems as a justification for lunacy and evil produced by various groups and an overall appetite for destruction.
Love is sweaty palms, red cheeks, butterflies in your stomach, a pounding in your chest, your thoughts revolve around that person and you do everything you can to make them happy, because they make you happy.
ReplyDeleteAmanda Martinez Hour- 2
ReplyDeleteA four letter word that holds infinite power, yet tranquilizes the soul. It captivates the heart and mind which makes the smallest acts seem of utter importance. Love is patient. Love is kind. Love is unconditional. Love is rare.
Matt Mangiameli - Hour 2
ReplyDeleteA sound of laughter but also sorrow, reconciled by a warm embrace. A deep, calming company that even the naked eye could distinguish. A more bitter than sweet feeling, smelling of fresh flowers offered in the most appropriate of times; a feeling of no equal.
Amber Zubeck- Hour 2
ReplyDeleteTo the teenager with the broken heart, it is overrated; but to the couple who has been together fifty plus years, it is real.
A five foot-two inch, gentle woman, with a heart full of love and passion not only for her fast-pace, one of a kind family, but along with her strenuous, time consuming, male dominated job.
ReplyDeleteGarrett Kays - Hour 2
ReplyDeleteViolence is the offspring of arrogance and ignorance, the child of the heart's greatest intentions and spawn of the mind's most malicious designs.
Ahhh the texture was so smooth and everlasting, the taste like liquid gold; the feeling was as cold as the first winter day. Making my body scream for joy, at last my thirst was gone I no longer suffered for air.
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ReplyDeleteRegan Harker Hour-3
ReplyDeleteSparkling and blue, with transparency like glass, the chill from it's icy temperatures rushed over my hands cleaning off the dirt in a fluid motion.
Kaitlin McFarland- Hour 2
ReplyDeleteRage and fiery with thrashing punches and bruised tender skin with blood dripping from aching places showing there's only one winner
Kathryn McFarland- Hour 3
ReplyDeleteAn envelope of comfort, security, and constant reassurance, uniquely associated with one person.
McKenzie Williams - Hour 4
ReplyDeleteWater is like the blood that runs through your veins that your body aches with desire to have.
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ReplyDeleteBrielle Rosas - Hour 4
ReplyDeleteShe stands about 5'4 and her eyes change with her mood. She speaks with a voice full of passion and it carries as if she's talking into a microphone. She's crazy and a little insane; but she's my rock, and she's my biggest fan.
Love is like the rain. It can nourish you and make you gloomy all in the same day
ReplyDeleteJesus came to make it abundant for everyone. It is full of opportunities, valuable lessons, and beauty. It will always be something to be thankful for.
ReplyDeleteOne word for which many languages have many. Its many forms are worlds apart, but the feeling is one that fills us over a thousand times and still has endless bliss to give.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth Porch - 3rd hour
ReplyDeleteIt's a wolf in sheep's clothing, a disease whose symptoms include sweaty palms and stuttered words, that manifests itself in shades of reds and pinks. It's something everyone searches for, perhaps a little too desperately.
A loving man with a scruffy beard and warm heart that plays sports with such ferocity the mightiest golden lions and most majestic black bears would seek out shelter to escape his pinpoint midrange jumper.
ReplyDeleteHer love is as strong as the jaws of a great white.With rosy red cheeks and a giant white smile, she is there for you. She is always protecting and caring for you through thick and thin.
ReplyDeleteA father is hard me me to depict or describe. I have no vivid or photogentic memory of him. I think of him as an Haleys's commit. IF you get a glimpse it glourious , beautiful & a once in a lifetime find because your eyes will never see it again as it darts away from you in the night sky. It has no set destination & stops for no one.
ReplyDeleteOnly once in a life time do you get to experience an unconditional bond, between you and that special person, that uncontrollably gives you bubbles in your stomach and makes you grin ear to ear.
ReplyDeleteOver the years, starched white collars had worn the leather just below the headrest. He'd worked hard both to carve the worn spot, and to carve the life he presently lives. The seat supported his head, while his paycheck supported his children.
ReplyDeleteYou're body is filling with rage, blood pumping with fire. Your mind feels like it's in hell with the warmth you are feeling. Your never having these emotions unless someone triggers it.
ReplyDeleteAn invisible cloak of protection, being tightly cuddled in a warm blanket on a chilly winter night. Love is the sound of a humming bird softly singing its song as it glides blissfully across a garden full of orchids.
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