1. Read the first draft of "If at First You Do Not See" (241-243)
Pay attention to the suggestions being made in the side margins.
The second incarnation of this essay starts on 242, where you will see changes that were implemented. Look at the marginalia to see how improvements were made.
2. You will now read 246-249. Keeping in mind the descriptive techniques, but now considering the Narrative Structure and Components, study how Sullivan constructs the description of her neighborhood, but also presents an underlying THEME. What is her point? How is her description utilized to support this major point?
3. You will now recreate Sullivan's initial assignment, which was to tell your readers what your neighborhood looks like.... BUT you need to keep in mind the major theme of a narrative work. What is the driving force in your description? What do you want to prove? When your reader is done reading, how would they summarize your neighborhood? THEME. MESSAGE. THESIS.
Follow the outline structure that MUST be in your notes.... also be referencing the Narrative rubric. Does your writing include the necessary components.
Bring a hard copy of your draft to class with you on Monday...
ALSO... Monday is "TRAVEL DAY" for HOMECOMING.... I am shooting for 95% participation!! Do it, people!
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